Talk:KCU/03/A

Instructor's feedback on first draft

As a first draft, what you have here falls short (if it were submitted as the final draft, you would not pass--good thing it's not the final draft!). You have a few decent paragraphs. However, everything needs to be developed further.

Things to be improved:

1. You need to bring in dialog partners from extra research

2. You need to cover the different positions advocated in Christian circles on accepting/disciplining sinning Christians

3. You need to cover all relevant Scriptures

4. For those Scriptures you find, bring in technical commentaries as dialog partners: e.g., commentaries from the NIV Application Commentary Series, the Word Biblical Commentary Series, the New International Commentary on the New Testament Series, &/or the Baker Exegetical Commentary on the New Testament Series