Talk:KCU/03/MBCS

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As a first draft, this contribution falls short. (This would not pass if submitted for the final draft.) Your first two paragraphs are not bad, but they really can only serve as an introductory section. You are lacking the body & conclusion of your paper. You are also lacking detailed evidence & dialog partners from extra research

Things to work on:

1. Write a lot more paragraphs like what you have with your introduction

2. Bring in dialog partners from extra research

3. Look up more of the biblical evidence

4. Look up technical commentaries on the biblical evidence: e.g., commentaries from the NIV Application Commentary Series, the Word Biblical Commentary Series, the New International Commentary on the New Testament Series, &/or the Baker Exegetical Commentary on the New Testament Series.

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