Talk:KCU/04/Chupicabra

Instructor's Feedback on First Draft

This is a nicely written first draft. The sentences & paragraphs are well-formed & the article reads like it fits together as a whole. So, good job on that!

If this were the final draft, the grade would be something like a C. The main reason is that you need to add more dialog partners from extra research & you also need to expand your biblical coverage more (though less than with dialog partners).

Things to improve:

1. Incorporate more dialog partners from extra research into your discussion in a smooth way

2. Look at other biblical evidence. Three lines that you can examine more are: (1) Jesus' practice of gathering & traveling with his disciples; (2) Paul's practice of having traveling companions & his expressions of longing & affection for them when they're absent; & (3) the emphases on Christian as a body, a family, etc.

You have a nice start. So, keep up the good work!