Talk:KCU/03/A
Instructor's feedback on first draft
As a first draft, what you have here falls short (if it were submitted as the final draft, you would not pass--good thing it's not the final draft!). You have a few decent paragraphs. However, everything needs to be developed further.
Things to be improved:
1. You need to bring in dialog partners from extra research
2. You need to cover the different positions advocated in Christian circles on accepting/disciplining sinning Christians
3. You need to cover all relevant Scriptures
4. For those Scriptures you find, bring in technical commentaries as dialog partners: e.g., commentaries from the NIV Application Commentary Series, the Word Biblical Commentary Series, the New International Commentary on the New Testament Series, &/or the Baker Exegetical Commentary on the New Testament Series
Here are some web resources that may be helpful:
http://www.christianitytoday.com/ct/special/churchdiscipline.html
http://www.christianitytoday.com/ct/2005/august/13.31.html
http://www.the-highway.com/discipline_Mohler.html
http://www.wayoflife.org/fbns/ntdiscipline/ntdiscipline01.htm
http://www.bible.org/page.php?page_id=532
http://www.biblebb.com/files/MAC/1291.htm
http://www.geocities.com/campuschristians_tx/studies/judgenot.html
http://www.livingvinechurch.org/ds/hp931/hp931.html
http://biblical-counsel.org/qa-26t.htm