Talk:KCU/04/Group 1
Instructor Feedback on First Draft
As a first draft, this contribution falls short. (This would not pass if submitted for the final draft.) You have a start on each model, but each one is underdeveloped.
Things to work on:
1. Expand your discussion of each model
2. Incorporate more dialog partners from extra research for each model
3. Look up more of the biblical evidence
4. Look up technical commentaries on the biblical evidence: e.g., commentaries from the NIV Application Commentary Series, the Word Biblical Commentary Series, the New International Commentary on the New Testament Series, &/or the Baker Exegetical Commentary on the New Testament Series.