Talk:KCU/03/Jesa
Instructor Feedback on First Draft
As a first draft, this contribution falls short. The section posted by Jake Lewis is quite good as a start. It is just too short & not detailed enough to pass.
Things to work on:
1. Bring in more sources as dialog partners
3. Look up biblical evidence--give a thorough treatment of all relevant biblical data on the second coming
4. Look up technical commentaries on the biblical evidence: e.g., commentaries from the NIV Application Commentary Series, the Word Biblical Commentary Series, the New International Commentary on the New Testament Series, &/or the Baker Exegetical Commentary on the New Testament Series
5. Develop the outline & evaluation that you already have in terms of distinctions between the different views