Talk:KCU/04/Optimists

Instructor's Feedback on First Draft

As a first draft, this contribution falls short (it would not pass if it were the final draft). You do have a nicely written intro & some paragraphs beginning to deal with the issue. But you need to go much more in depth.

Things to improve:

1. Expansion of existing discussions

2. Incorporation of more dialog partners from extra research

3. Look for biblical support

4. Include commentaries on biblical support as dialog partners