Talk:KCU/03/Ballers
Instructor's Feedback on First Draft
As a first draft, this falls very short. The reason is that you have copied & pasted one dialog partner for most of the draft. (You also didn't cite the web address you got it from: http://www.9marks.org/partner/Article_Display_Page/0,,PTID34418%7CCHID776334%7CCIID2221308,00.html)
This resource is pretty good. But, you can only use part of it & incorporate it into your own outline & your own development of the topic.
Things to improve:
1. Do more research to see how different people deal with the topic of suffering.
2. Come out with your own outline after learning from the different resources you find in your extra research
3. Write your own discussion & incorporate these resources as dialog partners
4. Look for all relevant biblical evidence & cover them in your discussion
5. Look up technical commentaries on the biblical evidence: e.g., commentaries from the NIV Application Commentary Series, the Word Biblical Commentary Series, the New International Commentary on the New Testament Series, &/or the Baker Exegetical Commentary on the New Testament Series.
Here's some web resources that may be helpful:
http://www.desiringgod.org/ResourceLibrary/TopicIndex/32/
http://www.christiancourier.com/articles/read/the_value_of_human_suffering
http://www.christianresponse.org/articles/3/suffering-and-solidarity
http://www.biblebb.com/files/MAC/sg60-28.htm
http://www.christianity.co.nz/suffer5.htm
http://biblia.com/jesusbible/job2.htm
http://www.biblebb.com/files/MAC/80-285.htm
http://ministryhealth.net/mh_articles/016_principles_of_suffering_outline.html