Talk:KCU/03/Lions

Instructor Feedback on First Draft

As a first draft, this contribution falls short. (This would not pass if submitted for the final draft.) You do have some promising introductory paragraphs. You need to incorporate sources into your discussion. The unfilled parts of the outline need to be developed.

Things to work on:

1. Write out paragraphs for the rest of the outline like with the introductory section.

2. Bring in sources

3. Look up biblical evidence

4. Look up technical commentaries on the biblical evidence: e.g., commentaries from the NIV Application Commentary Series, the Word Biblical Commentary Series, the New International Commentary on the New Testament Series, &/or the Baker Exegetical Commentary on the New Testament Series

5. Clean up the formatting

Here's some web resources that may be helpful:

http://www.desiringgod.org/ResourceLibrary/TopicIndex/2/

http://www.desiringgod.org/ResourceLibrary/TopicIndex/3/

http://www.desiringgod.org/ResourceLibrary/TopicIndex/56/

http://www.baylor.edu/content/services/document.php/33304.pdf