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== Instructor's Feedback on First Draft == | == Instructor's Feedback on First Draft == | ||
As a first draft, this contribution falls short (it would not pass if it were the final draft). You do have a nicely written intro & some paragraphs beginning to deal with the issue. But you need to go much more in depth. | As a first draft, this contribution falls short (it would not pass if it were the final draft). You do have a nicely written intro & some paragraphs beginning to deal with the issue. But you need to go much more in depth. | ||
'''Things to improve''': | |||
1. Expansion of existing discussions | |||
2. Incorporation of more dialog partners from extra research | |||
3. Look for biblical support | |||
4. Include commentaries on biblical support as dialog partners | |||
Revision as of 16:51, 27 September 2007
Instructor's Feedback on First Draft
As a first draft, this contribution falls short (it would not pass if it were the final draft). You do have a nicely written intro & some paragraphs beginning to deal with the issue. But you need to go much more in depth.
Things to improve:
1. Expansion of existing discussions
2. Incorporation of more dialog partners from extra research
3. Look for biblical support
4. Include commentaries on biblical support as dialog partners