Talk:KCU/04/Knights
Instructor's Feedback on Your First Draft
As a first draft, this contribution falls short. If it were the final draft, you would not pass. Good thing this is not the final draft! You really only have a short outline.
Things to Improve:
1. Expand your discussion of Arianism, Mormonism, Jehovah's Witnesses, etc. into their own sections having several paragraphs each devoted to them
2. Bring in dialog partners from extra research to expand your discussion above. Bring in original documents & writings of people who believe & teach those views, preferably
3. Cover all relevant scripture on the Trinity
4. Bring in commentaries on those scriptures as dialog partners. The commentaries most likely to be helpful are the ones from the NIV Application Commentary Series, the Word Biblical Commentary Series, the New International Commentary on the New Testament Series, &/or the Baker Exegetical Commentary on the New Testament Series.
Here's some web resources that may be helpful:
http://www.sbts.edu/Resources/Publications/Journal/Spring_2006.aspx
http://www.the-highway.com/trinity_Bavinck.html
http://www.the-highway.com/trinity_Watson.html
http://www.desiringgod.org/ResourceLibrary/TopicIndex/117/
http://www.christianity.co.nz/trinity.htm
http://www.religionfacts.com/christianity/beliefs/trinity.htm
http://everystudent.com/forum/trinity.html?gclid-CKae-uCU204CFQp7PAod5_A
http://www.htb.org.uk/audio/trinity-why-it-matters-graham-tomlin