Talk:KCU/04/Smarties

Instructor's Feedback on Your First Draft

As a first draft, your contribution is acceptable. If this were the final draft, you would pass with a low C/high D level grade. (But this is not the final draft, so you can improve on that grade for sure.) You have an excellent dialog partner in the Baylor study. You appear to do a good job summarizing the results & using it to develop your discussion. Good job so far!

Things to improve:

1. More dialog partners should be brought in

2. More relevant scriptures should be brought in (though you already have a decent number)

3. Technical commentaries should be brought in as dialog partners on the scriptures you bring in. The commentaries most likely to be helpful are ones from the NIV Application Commentary Series, the Word Biblical Commentary Series, the New International Commentary on the New Testament Series, &/or the Baker Exegetical Commentary on the New Testament Series.